Asttle Narrative Writing - SAVING THE TOWN

Teacher Note - ‘UNASSISTED’ ASTTLE WRITING

1. The children write for a total of 40 minutes. Within that timeframe they have to plan their writing (a brainstorm) write, edit and re-craft their work. They are not allowed to use dictionaries or word cards. The students completed their writing on paper but have typed it out for their blogs.

WALT write a creative narrative story!

 Once there was a princess and prince and they lived in a BIG castle and one day they heard a whisper but there was no one there only the prince and the princess and they think it is the wizard but he lived two houses away so how could it be him so the prince let out the dog to see if it was the wizard that was whispering and it was not him so who was it they said again? The prodlim was that the dog did not know what the wizard smells like. Lucky the prince had a T-short that had his scent on it but they notised that the dog was not sniffing so they had a solution.

1. WALT write a creative narrative story!

Thank-you Whaea Seroya

 

Alaris Persuasive Writing

            WALT plan our Persuasive Writing ,planing 

Legends Assembly

 We are learning to use descriptive language in our writing.

 

Mahuika Show

Mahuika Show 09.06.21

My favourite part of the Mahuika Show was when potiki came out of the magic kete and nana said NO NO DON’T touch that and nana tried to move it but she accidently touched it and turned into coal. It was my favourite part because nana turned into coal and  then they had to go and find a way to turn her back!

 

My Mum Toni

My Mum Toni

I’d like to introduce my mum Toni .She has brown eyes like the bark of a puriri tree and she's tall she loves wearing black clothes and black pants she look as black as our cows Mum loves wearing a messy bun her favourite TV show is country calendar like nana . Mum's favourite colour is red and black and green

I love the guinea pigs but she doesn't like them at all. She loves going to plant base  cause she likes getting free coffee and plants  I love doing arts and crafts on the weekend plus netball on Saturday with mum. My Mum is the best Mum in the world because she takes me to netball and loves playing chess and monopoly.

I love you Mum,

Love Alaris

Tsunami Evacuation

1. We wrote a recount about our evacuation experience.

Second Draft

On Friday there was a Tsunami Evacuation so we had to climb the mountain and I was so hot and sweaty we stopt and ate morning tea. After we kept walking we stopped for half an hour and then we plaid  charades and I felt a little scared and a little nervous.

I loved waking up the hill because I love waking and running. I had so much fun .Then we went down a hill and had a rest in the shade and it was so nice and cold. After that we had a sausage sizzle and milk. It was so nice because I was so HUNGRY!!!We were up on the hill for five hours.

 

The Great Reading Adventure

We are learning to write a moment in time about our class assembly, 'The Great Reading Adventure'.

I was so excited because the day had finally come. I was a bit scared ,nervous and happy . I was at the start and I was friend 3. I had butterflies in my tummy.my lines were I love reading books cats dogs guinea pig cows I love animals my other line was you just need to find a book you love come on wile help you As I started to say my line they started going a way . i felt proud!! After my group was the Wonky Donkey ,BFG,Non-fiction,Maui and the Sun.I had so much fun because me and the rest of the group except for Kylan and Elena could watch the show We loved it Whaea Deb and Mrs Davan!

Tractor Trek

Last Friday a Tractor Trek came to school so we could play on them at lunch time. It was so much fun . After that we went to the hall and we saw a lady. Then Tame ,Charlie and Millan got called up. Tame wore a skeleton suit and she was so funny  Charlie wore a mood mask Millan had to wear funny glass Cat and she told us things about feelings. The first one was happy but then she became sad because she moved to Auckland so she couldn't go on the motorbike  with her dad to milk  because she live in Auckland. She  gave us a mood cube.  

All About Me Poem

I am learning to add details to my BIO poem writing.

I wrote a poem about myself and my whanau.